Interpreter of Maladies, by Jhumpa Lahiri, is one of those collections of stories I’ve heard about for years. It came out in 1999 and won the Pulitzer Prize.
I think I dragged my feet on it because of the Oprah endorsement and the fact that I assumed I knew it already (i.e. it’s just another of those MFA story collection clones).
Today, I want to dig in to the first story in the collection, “A Temporary Matter.”
It kind of blew me away. This is the type of story one should spend a lot of time understanding if one wants to do short fiction well. It packs a serious emotional punch but also has a ton of things to notice on subsequent readings.
WARNING: The entire story will be revealed. If you want to experience it as intended, read it first.
Structure of A Temporary Matter
Short stories tend to focus really, really hard on a single moment: think Joyce’s Dubliners. This is because if one is showing instead of telling, there just isn’t room to do anything else.
Lahiri builds to this moment in “A Temporary Matter” with a lot of backstory, and to do this, she has to “tell.” So it will be interesting to see how she does this in an engaging way.
The structure of the story is also really important.
It jumps around in time, and this is done so that certain emotional reveals happen where they need to happen. Here’s the structure labeled in a way that can be referred to (the whole thing is told in past tense limited third-person).
Sequence of Past events revealed
Final Present moment
Brief Plot Summary
Present 1: Shoba and Shukumar receive a notice that the electric company will shut the power off for an hour each night to fix some power lines (a temporary matter).
Past 1: We get a semi-flashback to Shukumar finding out that Shoba went into early labor while he was away at an academic conference. The baby dies, and Shoba resents Shukumar for not being there during the horrific experience.
Present 2: The first blackout night comes up and Shukumar makes dinner.
Past 2: There’s a brief description of how they’ve developed nightly routines of avoiding each other. It’s brilliant how none of these flashbacks feel like flashbacks. It’s more like Shukumar is having idle thoughts while cooking. This layers in the backstory more naturally than a true jarring flashback.
Past 3: We also get thoughts about Shoba’s mother coming to visit and help after the miscarriage.
Present 2: The real content of the story begins at this first blackout dinner. Under the safety of darkness, they decide to play a game where they each reveal a secret they’ve never told the other before. The secrets start out minor: cheating on a test years ago, getting drunk in the middle of the day once.
Present 3: The game continues each night, and they start to be able to talk to each other again. They start to fall in love again and move through the grief. They even make love. Then the final night comes, and the power company finishes early.
They have light.
They still play the game, because each has saved their bombshell for the final night. Shoba reveals that she has signed a lease to an apartment, and she’s moving out. Shukumar reveals that he actually made it back from the conference and held the baby after the miscarriage.
The ending is left open.
Why it Works
As you can see, the structure is quite complicated, but it must be this way for the most emotional resonance. Let’s look at how these “flashbacks” work by taking a passage from the first one.
Each time he thought of that moment, the last moment he saw Shoba pregnant, it was the cab he remembered most, a station wagon, painted red with blue lettering. It was cavernous compared to their own car. Although Shukumar was six feet tall, with hands too big ever to rest comfortably in the pockets of his jeans, he felt dwarfed in the back seat. As the cab sped down Beacon street, he imagined a day when he and Shoba might need to buy a station wagon of their own, to cart their children back and forth from music lessons and dentist appointments.
There are two things that make this fit into the story so well. First, it meanders like thought. So instead of jerking you to another time and place with a sudden hard break, it lets Shukumar’s thoughts wander, as if he’s actually standing in the present still, thinking about it.
The other thing is that it sticks to one important detail and drills into it: the car.
At first, it’s just the physical description. But then it becomes an emotional description. It’s not a detail for detail’s sake. This detail is important.
He thinks about how he and Shoba would need a car like that for their future children. He has no idea that his wife is about to lose the baby.
Lahiri also lets Shukumar’s present thoughts bleed into this passage by indicating “the last moment he saw Shoba pregnant…”
A Temporary Matter: Title
The title is very clever. I don’t want to dwell on it too much, but it draws attention to how many of the disparate threads weave together.
The lights going out is a temporary matter. The game is a temporary matter. We come to believe that the title is secretly about the rocky place of the relationship being a temporary matter.
They’re moving through it and falling in love again.
But then it smacks us in the end. It’s actually their relationship which is temporary. Obviously, it’s easy to read too much into this, because everything in life is temporary. So the title would draw these themes out of any story.
There’s also a lot of interesting symbolic stuff going on. For example, the darkness each night doesn’t merely give them safety to speak their minds. It also represents that both are in the dark about the interior states of the other.
It’s not an accident that Lahiri cuts the darkness short on the fifth night so that when the truth is revealed they are in light.
This is what makes the story so brilliant. One can read it without noticing any of this stuff and have a serious emotional reaction to it but then read it again and notice how all these details reveal who the characters really are and the conflicting themes and the symbols.
Other Short Fiction Articles:
- Daisy Miller
- The Awakening
- The Red Pony
- Breakfast at Tiffany’s
- The Call of Cthulhu
- Tenth of December